Book Review: Bumped by Megan Mcafferty

Goodreads Description

When a virus makes everyone over the age of eighteen infertile, would-be parents are forced to pay teen girls to conceive and give birth to their children, making teens the most prized members of society.

Sixteen-year-old identical twins Melody and Harmony were separated at birth and had never met until the day Harmony shows up on Melody’s doorstep. Until now, the twins have followed completely opposite paths. Melody has scored an enviable conception contract with a couple called the Jaydens. While they are searching for the perfect partner for Melody to bump with, she is fighting her attraction to her best friend Zen, who is way too short for the job.

Harmony has spent her whole life in religious Goodside, preparing to be a wife and mother. She believes her calling is to bring Melody back to Goodside and convince her that “pregging” for profit is a sin. But Harmony has secrets of her own that she is running from.


When Melody is finally matched with the world-famous, genetically flawless Jondoe, both girls’ lives are changed forever. A case of mistaken identity takes them on a journey neither could have ever imagined, one that makes Melody and Harmony realize they have so much more than just DNA in common.



My review

Having read several dystopian books I’ve really liked this year and enjoying interviewing the author, I was really hoping that I’d love Bumped . There has been a lot of controversy around the blogosphere about Bumped with a divide between people who loved it and people who thought the book wasn’t for them. Unfortunately, I fell into the latter category.

I had a really hard time getting into Bumped because of the unfamiliar slang of the dystopian world Megan Mcafferty created. Instead of building up the atmosphere bringing the world to life, the words like ‘rilly,’ 'reproaesthetic' and ‘neggy' just confused me and ended up sounding forced. So rather than adding to my reading experience they became an unwelcome frustration because the talk was hard to follow. I think this could have been helped by a glossary at the back for the made up vocabulary because even having finished the book I'm not sure I could completely explain all the terms.

Melony and Harmony made a nice contrast to each other because of their vastly different personalities and backgrounds, which meant I was able to see their world from different points of view. This was helped by the story being told from both their points of view in alternating chapters. I liked the idea of Harmony being bought up in a religious community because it balanced out against the rest of the materialistic society but I did find the way she wanted to share her religion all the time with everyone she met rather annoying at times and it showed religion in a bad light. Melody's relationship with Zen was a high point in the book because it was the only one that seemed to have true depth and the banter between them added a lot of humour to the story.
The twins did develop throughout the course of the book but I just didn't feel a connection with them and this particularly affected my enjoyment. I think this could be because I just wasn't able to picture them in my head and they almost didn't feel like real people.

The topic of young teenage girls getting pregnant for profit was always bound to be controversial and the book did succeed in making me uncomfortable but also slightly curious about the dystopian world. It was very thought provoking because it made me think about some of the issues with teen pregnancy we face now. Despite this and the interesting premise, I found the extremely casual sexual talk and  drug references a little too much considering my age and this put me off so I'd only recommend it to the upper end of the YA market. I think I'd have enjoyed the plot more if these issues had been dealt with in a more serious way instead of making it fun spirited because it would have hit my emotions harder.

However, I must say that the idea was a very original one and I applaud Megan Mcafferty on daring to take a risk . The society presented in Bumped is different from other dystopians I've read because it didn't have a controlling government and I think this gave it a lot of scope for the characters because they had more of a grip on their future. I also found that this made the society seem scarily believable to me because it's closer to what I know and could imagine happening, which was what gave the book an almost creepy atmosphere. To get the bigger picture of the society as a whole, I would have liked to have seen more adult interaction within the book (even though I know it's a teen centred society) and have known more about the infertility virus that hit the world.

Verdict/ Quick Read: Unfortunately Bumped didn't live up to its exciting premise for me because I couldn't connect with the characters well and the teen speak bogged the story down. Despite this, I was impressed at the originality and the thoughts it provoked so I won't forget it easily. It wasn't the book for me and I don't think I'll be reading the sequel but I would still encourage you to try it if the premise appeals and you like dystopians because I know so many people who have loved it!

Rating: 2 stars

Thank you to Harper Teen for providing me a review copy via NetGalley

A Cornucopia of Dystopia Event: Interview with author Megan Mcafferty

Megan McCafferty is the author of Bumped, a satirical dystopian YA novel to be published by the Balzer + Bray imprint of HarperCollins on April 26th, 2011. She also wrote the bestselling Jessica Darling series. Megan edited a short story anthology called Sixteen: Stories About That Sweet and Bitter Birthday. She has contributed to several fiction and nonfiction anthologies including My Little Red Book, Does This Book Make Me Look Fat? and Everything I Need To Know About Being a Girl Came From Judy Blume. Her work has been translated into eleven languages, including German, Chinese and Hungarian. She is writing the sequel to Bumped. (Bio from Goodreads)

Today is the start of the A Cornucopia of Dystopia event held by The Bookish Type and A Tapestry Of Words, which I posted about earlier, and I am very pleased to have the author of Bumped, an upcoming YA dystopian book, Megan Cafferty on the blog today to answer some of my questions about Bumped. So, without further ado- welcome Megan!

• What was your inspiration for Bumped? Can you describe your process as it went from an idea germinating in your mind to a fully-formed story on the page?

My fascination with the media’s response to teen pregnancy started with the notorious Gloucester High School pregnancy pact. A few months later, Bristol Palin and Jamie Lyn Spears battled for the dubious distinction as the nation’s most famous teen mom. That media brouhaha, coupled with the critical and commercial success of Juno, made teen pregnancy a hot topic in the media, with a lot of hand-wringing over the sexual activities of teenage girls in particular. All this controversy prompted me to ask myself: What if teenage girls were encouraged to get pregnant? Why would that happen? Ultimately, I settled on a virus that makes adults infertile so only teenagers get have babies. I did research for almost a year before I started writing, and spent another year creating the characters, plotting, and—finally—writing it all down.

• How was the writing experience for Bumped different from writing your Jessica Darling series and how do you think your fans will react?

I had written about Jessica Darling’s world for ten years. I knew all those characters inside and out, and I underestimated how difficult it would be to get to know Melody and Harmony in that same way. Plus, I was creating a whole new world so the first draft was too long and all over the place because I hadn’t figured out what was important and what was filler. Many thanks to my amazing editor, Alessandra Balzer, because Bumped is a book that really didn’t come together until after the first round of major revisions.

Like the Jessica Darling series, there’s a lot of humor in Bumped—it’s not grim like you’d expect a dystopian novel to be. I never thought I would write anything that crossed into sci-fi territory, so I don’t blame readers for thinking, “What the what???”

• What was your process like to get into a teenage mindset for this novel? How did you build believable teens in this foreign, futuristic world, and how do you think teenagers today will relate to the characters of twins Melody and Harmony?

I didn’t focus on what would change. I focused on what would stay exactly the same. The characters in the novel are bored by school, play soccer, party too hard, gossip, flirt, fight with their parents, get hooked on technology and obsess over pop culture. It’s easier for them to focus more on their own futures than the fate of the Western Civilization. I think today’s teenagers will see a lot of themselves in these characters, despite the apocalyptic scenario.

• Can you talk about the research or preparation that went into writing Bumped?

I did more research for Bumped than anything I’ve ever written before. I read dense books about the history of surrogate motherhood, reproductive technology, and the influence of religion on teens’ sexual decision-making. I read memoirs about girls (now grown women) forced to give up their babies for adoption in the decades before Roe vs. Wade, and about twins who were separated at birth and reunited as adults. I clipped countless articles and editorials arguing for and against abstinence only and comprehensive sex education programs. I watched hours of Christian teens’ testimonies on YouTube and have not missed a single episode of 16 & Pregnant or Teen Mom (1 & 2). In short, I did what I could to make sure even the craziest aspects of the book were rooted in reality.

• What were your favourite things about writing a dystopian novel?

I loved inventing a fictional world that reflects what’s happening in the real world right now.

· How are you feeling about the anticipation for the release of Bumped?

I’m eager to see what conversations it inspires.

· What message do you hope readers bring away with them from Bumped?

I’ll tell you what message I don’t want readers to take away: That BUMPED somehow promotes teen pregnancy as the cool thing to do. That couldn’t be further from the truth! If anything, I hope to raise serious questions about the “pornification” of our culture and the repercussions of loveless, senseless sexual activity. I find it hard to believe that readers could think otherwise…unless they don’t appreciate satire. This is a book about the dangers of extreme thinking, so I guess I shouldn’t be surprised by extreme reactions.

· Where is your favourite place to write?
I have a home office and it’s the only place I can work on my books. To stay focused I need solitude, green tea, dark chocolate, and music. For BUMPED I listened to a lot of LCD Soundsystem, though the soundtrack varies from day to day, scene to scene.

· What writing project are you working on now?

I’m working on the sequel to BUMPED and developing the idea for the book I’ll write after that. I’m not sure where this idea will take me, but that’s what makes my writing life interesting!

Thank you very much Megan for taking the time to answer my questions and giving such a fascinating insight into Bumped! It's amazing where inspiration can come from and it's really intertesting to know. I got a review copy off Net Galley and I'm enjoying it so far. Make sure you stop by some of the other blog posts for the event today, they're listed on the event schedule here.